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North Quarteris Italian, it would seem...

NB. This needs expansion, but we need to know technical stuff about building construction first.

NBB. This is all a bit meh! It needs more detail, and more interaction between Harry and Alex, but I'm not feeling very museful today.




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Apr. 8th, 2011 07:35 pm
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Also not posted by Gabby, but with extra bits added by Cat

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So the old city is divided by the rivers into three "Quarters" which I've tentatively named the North Quarter the Central Quarte and the Cultural Quarter. There aren't many bridges. There is a central curving "high street" which is where most of the old buildings can be found and this has a bridge over each river (Main Bridge - should think of a better name) and Roman Bridge. There is a second bridge, St. Peter's Bridge between the north and central quarters. In the central area is an old 19th century slum area (the old warren) and that's where Alex's tenement is. I think we are going to have to set the city in this world. I suggest an imaginary tiny European principality between France and Italy, possibly with a large English-speaking community, possibly with English as the official language.

NB. Subsequently agreed on an island in the Adriatic sea between Italy and the Balkans. The historical remnant of ancient `Illyria'. The island is English and Italian speaking with a large British ex-pat population for reasons not yet well specified.
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I'm thinking we've got a rocky promotory, next to a big natural bay and a swampy river delta. So the old city is tucked into a flatish bit which is nevertheless rock for building on. This slopes gently down to the sea and the harbour, and is full of picturesque (or not so picturesque) old and cramped housing. Then the slope of the promotory gets much steeper and no one really built there, although there is a keep (?disused, ?ruined) at the top and a lighthouse on the point. However these days the steep slopes have been terraced and wealthy cliff-top mansions built overlooking the old city and the harbour. Meanwhile poorer housing has sprawled out from the city towards the marshy land of the delta, some of which is being reclaimed for yet more new housing. The old road from the city runs along the edge of the rocky ground, trying not to get too high. Meanwhile upriver from the delta is fertile farmland which used supply food to the city. There are a couple of much smaller rivers which essentially bring rain water run-off down from the ridge into the old quarter.

Hmm... not on the map but maybe a reservoir up there now and a hydro plant?
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It wasn't that Marco didn't like Alex. In fact Alex was all right, mostly, for someone who was fundamentally a do-gooder and nosey with it. However Marco was a small fish in a big pond and Alex had pissed off one of the big fish. Marco was simply delivering the message.

He told himself this as he watched Alex leaving the small studio where he worked. Marco knew where he was going to to deliver the message. There was a small alleyway, a short cut between a row of shops and the back door of Alex's tenement block. Alex always took that shortcut on his way home. Marco lurked in a doorway across the road from the entrance, half hoping that Alex would turn a different way, walk on to a bar, or down to the bay, or just go in by the front door for once in his life, but no.

Alex turned a corner and headed down the alleyway. Marco shrugged his shoulders in resignation, cracked his knuckles and followed. He had a message to deliver after all. Hopefully Alex wouldn't harbour any ill-feelings about it.

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Oct. 19th, 2010 11:56 am
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Harry leaned out of her sitting room window. Her small apartment was at the top of one of the old city tenements that teetered over the street below. If Harry looked down she could see the cobblestones of the street and the long-disused central gutter directly beneath her. If she looked out, her gaze was carried over the cascade of rooftops as they tumbled down the steep hillside and into the bay.

On mornings like this, when a light sea breeze blew up the hill and the sun was bright, everything looked fresh and inviting. The cramped, jumble of streets and houses became a delight.

If she craned her neck round a bit she could see the ugly squat squares of concrete of the new buildings in their rigid and space-efficient grids, although even they had flashes of colour where the residents had placed window boxes or the graffiti artists had left their mark. For all its awkardness, and density and inconvenience, Harry had to admit that it was a beautiful city.

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